Tempest (Raven's Claws)

[unedited]

Tempest

prevails over the landscape.

it is so stormy.

its one of these evenings

at which one wants to spend its time with the dearest one,

crawling together, wrapped into a cover the

opposite firmly clasping.

a candle illuminates the area irregularly

and their light throws confused dream shapes

into the theatres of the shades.

those there everywhere show their art to place.

the crimson gloss of the flame leaves the faces,

their collections in the dark appear glowing,

suitably the feeling of the warm, reassuring skin

the dearest.

the smell of her hair draws pictures to my mind

of a rosegrove, the ways lined with

hibiscus and hyacinths.

Pregnant vines, entice mean spirit to costing

the nektars, which drowse in the grapes

like the kisses in the lips of the dearest.

the breath of both, so delightfully wildly and the storm outside

enviously grow silent leaving.

it whips and shakes and tears, walks at our windows,

finds however no inlet.

all the strength, destruction rage and the attempts for kindling chaos.

Fail on 'oh so simple' togetherness, experiencing one

moment in the midst of a strange view, which forms itself

to cuddle of the familiar ones.

the beast whines, persists narcistic on its present,

while it tries intimidating,

to tear golden sheet work from the trees of the affection.

but despite all the strength, the tactics of the turns of its howling

and the variety of the storms of an apparently safe calamity.

the beast fails the moment of the fearinjection.

the raving craze yields a tender kiss.

the disfavor grows in the storm.

It drowns in it, lies burned out there.

gasping, sighing, at best clouds carrying.

to there.

we enjoy the evening.

and the time.

which is unfortunately never enough.

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The writing just keeps getting better... lovin' it! take care :)
[xanaphia]
how do you get the text around the mouse?
[metallicafreak]
Hey hun... that song isn't mine, but it is very good. It's by the White Stripes... I'm going to their concert on Monday! Yay!!!! Take care :)
[xanaphia]
i couldn't TRY to do the same for yours... i just let it take me where it wants to go...
don't say that. what did you fail at?
i love youre diary
[bikerbabe]
yes, it is VERY figuratively... i wouldn't bestow pain on anyone... emotionally or physically
thanks:)

I'm not looking for love i just want to escape it, when it's not a perfect situation.
:)Jenna
i want to hug the imagery you make inside my head with your words
Juup! Naja, war bischen nervig, die ganzen idioten da...egal, hatte halt en paar kumpels dabei, das einzige gute an Kennedys Tot, The Dead Kennedys ;)
[thehive]
thanks for the welcome note.
it was deeply appreciated.
[afterglow]
Queens of the Stone Age - Song for the Deaf

[Sixshooter]
[anonymous (209.179.141.218)]
Woah dude, I just read that entire poem while listening to "Song for the Deaf" it was almost like it was meant to be played while it was read, weird.
your welcome. =0)
[medusa]
the way your poem thing ended, I thought as if it sounded that you were missing her, and you don't see her often. Obviously I was stirred wrong. Sorry I'm dumb sometimes. :)
[medusa]
so you still not seeing your girlfriend that often? :( I'm sorry.

~Janet
[medusa]
the weener song is id like to be an oscer mayer weener that is what id really like to be cuz if i were an oscer mayer weener everyone would be in love with me :) ~*Libby*~
[lilme]
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