Raven' s Claws (autumn sneaks out, winter smiles)

Raven’s claws

up-fluttering cries,

wafting pinions plow

rattling cold night air.

the city lies there snoring

like a moloch, sulfur vapor out-coughing,

wing impacts whitewash nevertheless

the chirping neon advertisements.

seeping rain forms blacksparkling spume

into the gurgling abysses of the roads

rhythmic brake movements nervously clocked drivers

plashing as multicolored parallelepipeds into the weeping bitumen strands

of jolty roads.

squat cellphonedrugpushers leave newspapers

as rain protection over the head till they soft mash melee,

impatiently the dogs actually pull,

at the line the master,

outside from the weatherly inhospitableness.

my breath fits the smeared windscreen,

cravenly wiping I distribute it on the field of vision.

thoughts curve, float fluttering, croaking, cheering

highly to the raven, that continual, cold view

protection found under gargoyles

there, thought endures polishing.

rain pearls like hyaline tears dash melancholy crying

refuelling no color from its plumage,

nevertheless darkly falling and demonic coughin in the sewers and lowerings

the underearth of the city fills

with sweat and tears

and raven’s claws

the rushing, large sister, despairs red, clamored, trying

to prevent the small to play in puddles.

//Addendum: this chiseled sculpure lays there over the gate of our local church, funny, never saw it before, i walked by today and i thought it would fit to the poem.//

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hmm, i think that's far.. he's in bremen.
well have a nice day :)

~ Mina ~
[southgirl]
suck my wrinkly rod
[anonymous (65.95.124.74)]
i'm not sure why i changed my mind on my sitD name... :-) i like this one better, though. i really like your poetry. this one and "To Kiss You Dead" are among my favorites. :-) talk to you later! cheers!

*jenn*
[onlyonesmilepocket]
Hey hey now... not sick anymore! My ankle just hurts... heheh... That's a beautiful pic of natural selection. I like the gothic theme of that poem... it tickled me :) Take care hun :)
[xanaphia]
hey my AIM messnger is poetic6nightmare thats the one im on now...thanks
[metalteenchick]
hey awsome pic and another awsome poem keep up the good work*claps* bye bye
[metalteenchick]
Woah crazy what is that thing? A dragon eating a duck? Why would that be part of a church?
Hey!!
Your welcome.I had alot of fun.The crowds weren't too bad...i got presents for everyone but 1 or 2 ppl.

*~~Marisa~~*
[fastpitchgrl2489]
can u gimme the code for the cursor letter thing???
Just thought I'd let you know I really like your diary... I especially liked "To kiss you dead".
[roto]
Hey!! Your poems are seriously great!!!!I love them man!!!

*~~Marisa~~*
[fastpitchgrl2489]
yeah, i guess it is :)
btw i really love your writting and i wonder how you never run out of ideas. that's really.. strange, but.. awesome lol =)

~ Mina ~
[southgirl]
glad to know i'm not alone in my thoughts.
by the way, your writing is incredibly vivid.
glad you noted me.
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