You're never gonna get it right.

Did you beat me because you loved me, or was I bruised out of disgust? I fear your dissapointment in me for not comparing to her. There is no similarity or resemblence, down to the letter. I am but a young girl. I'm oh so delicate, and needing of your tough love. I bear your marks of love, or perhaps just primitive instinct. You can't rape the willing body true enough, but the willing spirit shortly thereafter wilts to wounded.
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this is really well written, once again i really love the way you write
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