story part three

. As she landed this time she new they where on to her. And sheer enough they where heading right for her. She quickly scrambled over the railing and started to run for the stairwell. She had an dieing erg to look back and sheer enough she did. She turned around and started to walk back words, the demeans know formed a cluster and where slowly walking closer to her. As she continued on walking backwards she never took her eyes off of them. The door opened form behind here she darer not tern around . Her hart was betting so fast it felt like it was going to rip out of her chest. Then a pair of arms grabbed her around her waste, so that she could not move an inch. The demeans continued on walking, then stopped. The one that had healed the dagger stepped feared and said. “Angel so nice of you to join us.” “There was traffic” said Angel in a deep voice. “that’s under stand able “said the demean as they looked at each one another and shuck there head to agree with him. “so who do we have here?” asked Angel as he turned the girl around so he could see her face. As the girl looked up at him she noticed that the man wasn’t unpleasant to look at. To put in better terms he was not by far as ugly as the demeans. His face was oval and not to pail. His chin had a cleft in it but it looked good on him, his eye where so big that you could see his sole inside of them. His hair was deep chocolate brown as is his eyes. The young women couldn’t talk her eyes off of him even if she tried he was holding her so tit that she could not move one inch. “Angel, baby this is the chosen one. The one that you need to get rid of to show us that you’re a true member of the black thorns.” said the devil looking demean as he stepped beside the weight nasty demean. “so this is the famous chosen one I thought she would put up more of a fight then this” said Angel as he looked in to her eye. Every thing went silent, you now could not heir the people hustling and bustling about. Nor the classical music that could be hired thought the mall, nothing at all but silence. Nothing went through the girls head but the thought of whether she was going to die or not. The young burnet looked once more at the mans face to try to see what fate had in store for her. Just as she looked up at his face she caught his eyes looking at the demeans. Little did she know that the demeans behind her where nodding their heads. To say go for it. With a blink of an eye the man had stopped looking at the demeans and now looked at the girl. With out any warning the mans face transformed .
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part two

“You are the chosen one and you must……….die“ with toughs words that where coming out of his mouth he reached in to his long opening of is cuff with his long hand and started to pull some thing out. His hand where moving slowly you couldn’t see what he was pulling out. Then it appeared, a shine metal surface of a dagger. With one quick move meant of his arm he reached for the girls neck to slit. I don’t now if it was her adrenalin or reflex that made her do the thing that she was about to do next or if it was destiny. The young girl bent down just missing to dagger that was meant to kill her. She swung her leg out and tripped the demeaned that was about to kill her. With a quick jump up off the gowned she was ready to kick some ass. The demeans weren’t to impress with what she had just don. So the did what any other demeaned would do in a time like this , they fought. The girl had on clew what to do. the demand’s where coming towards her. Punches where being to be thorn right left and centre. The young girl ducked and dug the in coming kicks and pouches from the un dead demeans . The young girl didn’t know what had came over her she started to fight back as if she had don this before in a past life. The way she moved was uncanny like a way a slayer would have moved. Quick, hard and with no remorse. There was a brake in the crowed the young girl started to run for it and only stopping to hurt some one that was in her way of being save. Even as she ran for freedom the demeans fallowed. The girl thought the only way she was getting to get o out of here was by death. She couldn’t go on any farther her feet heart do to the shows she was wearing. Once more the demeans surrounded her. Her back agents the bras railing. She thought to here self (this is it am going to die but what ) she had an idea (maybe just maybe could I could I make it ) she thought to her self as she looked over the railing. Then without any warning she jumped over to the other side of the railing. “say back or I well “ she said “you’ll what, jump ha ha ha ha ha “ said the demeaned sarcastically “ that’s what you’d like me to do isn’t it ? You want to kill me so why don’t I do it for you? One jump of this leg and am gone. that’s what you would like right ? Bbbbuuuutttt I think I have a different plain in mined sorry tata.” an with that the young girl jumped off. The demeans ran forward to see if her body had indeed fallen to the gerund . But to there sad relief she did not hit the gerund. There on the third floor hanging off the railing was the young women. With a quick glance up and a wave and a smile the young girl leaped over the railing and took off running. “get her know” he yell . With that the demeans took off running after her .On the third floor the young girl stopped running to push bake her long hair that was hanging in her face in to a ponytail that was kept on her rest. You’d never believe it coming from the stairwell was the demeans running to words her. The young girl took of running and demeans fallowed. She stopped and started to fight back. “don’t you ever fuck off” yelled the girl as she thought her left fist in to a demean that appeared to look like the devil him self. “not until your dead” said one of the demeans. “fine if we are playing that was so be it “ and with that the girl one more jumped over the railing
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part one of my story

The day had just became night the reds and pinks of the sky where fading in to the whirling black of the night. The street light had just turned on as did the mall light that light up the night sky. The mall parking lot was beginning to fill up with people that had come to shop the night away. The mall was four stores high with every shop that you could ever imagine. The light where so bright that you could see every wrinkle on a persons face as they past by you. The windows where more beautiful then words could describe. On the fourth floor high above the marble tilled floor of the mall. A figure of a young women window shopping . The why the light caught every expect of her body was magnificent. Her face was long and prefaced, there where no sings of ageing, no wrinkles, no blemishes nothing at all. Her skin was prefaced as if she was a person in a painting. Her hair was long ,curly and brown that lade ever so gently on her brood shoulders. Her wide eyes where an emerald green colour with hints of brown misted in. As the young women made her way down the hallway she looked at all the window that passed her by. By the time she reached the middle of the hallway she decided that it would be fun to look over the side of the railing to see all the wonders of the mall, as the women appeared over the braces railing she noticed that the mail had became more alive with people. The people where bumping it to one another and not even noticing it, but on the fourth floor there where not as many people except for her self and what appeared to be men in black robs with hoods over there faces and a man that seemed out of place form the reast of then. The man had on a black suit instead of a rob and you could see his face un like the others. But how was she to judge them hay this is the twenty fist century and besides she had a friend that wore a spike caller all the time. Without thinking about it for a another second she continued her way down the hallway. With out knowing it she had just walked it to the group of men not knowing what she was getting to. As the women tried to get free form the group it became more harder then ever. The men where bumping in to her right and left. Out of no where the group of men split apart for each other and formed a circle around her. Freer swapped across her face as one on the robs moved to words her. With a swift movie movement of his hand that where covered with his rob he grabbed her arm and turned it around so that her four arm was facings up words. There on her for arm appeared a tattoo, the man lifted his head and what you saw you would have never believed it. The figure was not a man at all. The figure was a demean well that was what it look like any whys. The thing face was weight as weight could be with horns extruding from his head his weight long fingered hands slipped out of his rob and touched her skin. His hands where are could as ice. chills ran down the girls spine. Then the thing take to her his voice over coming with power and hate. “the chosen one” with thoughts words the circle moved in tighter and tighter until they where right next to the girl. With a quick pull of her arm she was free from the demeans weight cloches. “what do you want from me”. screamed the green eyed girl. For one moment in time it seemed that time had just stopped. And every thing was going to be fine, but then the demean decided to talk.
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