why cant i.....

Listening to: jazz
Feeling: exasperated
Forget his name and face, forget his kiss and worm embrace. Foget the things he used to say, remember now he's gone away. Forget the things he used to do, remember now he loves her too. Forget the love that you once shared, Forget the fact that he once cared. Forget the way he said your name, remember now things are not the same. Forget the talks that you once had, Forget the thought, it makes you sad. Forget his gental, teasing ways, Forget you havent seen him in days. Forget the times he walked by, Forget the times he made you cry. Forget he used to hold your hand, Forget the sweet things if you can. Forget the times and don't pretend, remember now, he's not even a friend. Forget him when they play your song, Forget you cried all night long. Forget he said he'll leave you never, remember now, he's gone forever.
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Wow, that was totally great. I love emo-esque poetry/music/art, so you had me sucked in down to the last word. I loved it. Minor flow errors...rate 9.
[Anonymous]
if u wrote that ur really good ! and i give u props
i love writing !
-Laura Monique