Trying to say something

Im Trying to tell you something i can't get it off my chest i know i'll fail but ill still do my best I keep on trying to say the words but they get stuck somewhere in my throat My words turned into letter i wrote. I tried hard to say the words I wrote them down on my hand Just to not forget where i stand. When i looked at you did you look too? When i looked again Did you know who looked at you? I rehearsed the words to make sure i knew So that every word i said sounded true Made sure the eye contact was perfect to be honest, from you i don't know what to expect. Never had time looking behind coz i kept looking at you When you looked...you never mind Why was that? did you like me as i like you? Was everything coming out of your eyes true? did you like me 2? I tried hard to say the words I wrote them down on my hand Just to not forget where i stand When i looked at you did you look too? When i looked again Did u know who looked at you?(looked at you?) I hope You knew it was me. (it was me) i hope you don't care if i could just stare for one more minute... Note: i think this is the best song ive written and i love it..i sincerly do..
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hey thanks for the comment. and i like your song you wrote. its really really good
[Anonymous]
dammit. that was from me
Thank youu I always like getting compliments on my layouts =]

Your lyrics are really good! The only thing I would say is don't worry about rhyming so much, that can sound kind of dumb when it's actually sung. But the words make an impact =] Better than anything I've written anyway.


Jen
Thnx alot! Yea I LOVE shadows fall :-) they are sooo awesome :-) they are like my favorite other than soulfly :-)
thanks, right back at ya!
[Anonymous]
beautiful as usual.
romina.

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