New Song

Listening to: In Flames
You lay there anxiously As poisonous serpents race through my heart Cover it's grave with beautiful flowers. Carve on it's tomb: "In death we are together." Not another moment, I can wait. Writihing in the pain that is life's embrace, When you are away, Lifetimes go by in seconds. I'm not done yet....but what do you think?
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its gooooooood.

i dont really like the ending part, but everything else I like.
if you want a little constructive criticism.

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hm.
differentish.
the last two lines are a little weird, because the whole song is weird, and that just adds on.
wooh. good job, cathy.
it's hard to explain.
fo sho.