This is the new song

ok , well i have noticed that emo pretty much has the same format, it's all amazing but i tryed to take a turn for better or for worse, i already have 2 of my friends opinions on it. I would like girls and guys to comment on it. OK? so here it is. [chorus] i know youve heard this before but you are everything too me and if everything means slashes in my heart and my wrists then youre the person that makes me exist i would give it all just to look into your eyes just to what perfect is and until then i have to dream about what perfect is [chorus] {speaking} have you ever wondered why a rocket takes off, or why a man with a passion for a girl is just as vulnerable as a man with a ticking bomb? tick tick tick boom. your heart for her is bomb and everytime you see her it explodes. this is a premonition for every1. once you go into a mirror house, it takes an eternity to out of it, it is the same thing with love. when he/she has gone youre left there you nthink youre made for each other but time ruins it all. time is of the essence as some people say. but what if you try to win her heart every single day. does time play a part in that? you can try and try and never stop. Love transcends time. i am an inhibited man, i also find it hard to write all this. it will take time to process through youre head, but we are meant for each other. but this time i will core that point, the point that will win me the game and your heart. [chorus] yes i know, the speakingpart is a little long i kind of went crazy there, but with all myy songs i wanted to twist it up you know? ill cut down onn the speaking part nexttime but do u like it? dont be nice just tell me what you think ill understand. -bobby
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Bobby,

it's great. yeah the speakin part is a lil lengthy but still. GREAT. lols.
alright love ya babes

x0x
jUSt
[Anonymous]
omg love it love it love it <3

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[Anonymous]
thanks a lot...parents suck sometimes...im here too if u need me !!
oh and i like a lot ur lyrics!! =)ive got some poems in my diary if u wanna check them out.. my email is brenda_mhg@hotmail if u ever need something!