My love.
You’re dieing
I can see it in your eyes.
They're fading.
And your grip is loosening.
Grab my fucking hand.
Don’t hold on so loose.
This is making me wish for more.
And I feel so far.
N-n-no
We’re staying here forever.
And we're never growing old.
This is my biggest fear.
You need to be for me peter.
With our youth and our beauty.
This will never end.
We're gonna stay in Never land.
I've been thinking about it more and more.
And where is peter pan?
I’ve never needed him before.
He’s the only one that can keep me from dieing.
And he can stop all this lying.
Because with him,
These birthdays won’t mean a thing.
And we'll be complete with our youth together.
Mirror, Mirror
How amazing is my figure?
♥
some of the lines didn't seem to flow as well, like in your third stanza, the second line seems too long and wordy, but it's still very vivid.
awesome.
[doraemon]