*Death Before My Eyes*

Singing my heart out, before it begins As men on the sidelines stand up and cross the dancefloor, choosing their woman Couples begin to dance, longing to be in each other's arms for all eternity Sound outside fills the air Turning away the men and I leave for war Woman stare and capture one last image of the men as they take their leave. Gunshots fly past as we sail to shore Jumping out we wade in the water and head to land Struggling, we dodge behind shelter Bombs and guns are blasting as hard as ever A member of the army falls to the ground as a gunshot is fired through the atmosphere Screaming in pain he falls to the earth Sticky blood seeps through his uniform as we struggle to aid him Lying there his body overcomes stillness All around me is a blur Only thing in my eyes is the scene of the cold and motionless figure of, my brother. try to guess what i'm talking about in this poem :-) --------LaTeR---------- ok so yeah, i was basically putting the whole plot of the mcr music video "the ghost of you" into a poem...:-D ♥ xoxo brI
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hey, thanks for the comment on my poems... i dont get many, even from my mates, coz they are a bit nervous i think, but thanks for taking the time to read some of my writin. see ya.
Ami x x
I think you're talkin about the MCR music video...pretty obvious...dork..lol..j/k...but it was good....i still like Reflection best...1-10...8..

-Chels
that was pretty clever...i love it!

xoxo