6.) Nothingness yet Somethingness...Inevitable

Listening to: nodda
Feeling: different
Inevitable**** The pain gets stronger with every breath, You’re afraid to move, to change the scene. Your heart is terrified, your mind insane, All you’ve known is about to change. Smiles pass, you don’t know what to say, Lost in past memories is how you feel. Shortened breath, sharp cries, Tears come, strong and fierce. The time has come, you must say goodbye, You look at her and look at him and smile. The people you love more than life itself. You struggle with the words but whisper, “I love you.” You hug them and turn away, softly crying. You turn back and they are gone. The room is filled with their love, you struggle to breath. You realize you overcame the fear of leaving for good. Crying you smile and know you will never be alone again. You turn and never have to look back. this is all mine. i wrote that. read it, comment, tell u hate it, love it, despise it...give me opinions, suggestions. anything u want. i wont be offended, pissed off, angry, i wont kill myself if u hate it. i just want to know. i want to write a book of poetry and need suggestions and stuff. so let me know. i want LOTS of comments. **Carrie**
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That I have to say is awesome you definitly should rite a book of poems, I'd buy it! Just tell me when you get it published and your selling millions!
hah thanx I'm trying but it's hard I wanna be like perfect lol not like it's gonna happen but w/e