cedarville

i comment on

your doodles as

you're giving me

keys

you turn red

from the

attention

i go blank

from the

fear

i want to lay you down

lay your body over mine

like a waterfall crashing down

sharing a border

with the obscene

and the divine

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I absolutely love the second stanza. Perfectly described!
i always like reading your little pieces, you have the ability do write such insightful and beautiful things.