No need, no place, no care, no world, no you

Wow...i wrote this in five minutes...and it is probably the best one i have written. Please Read and Review and Rate (1-10) Could I just live out my life Without these chains of comprimise Of regret and responsibility You make my insecurities So if you see the blood on the floor It's mine and you have the knife And if I die from some poison I made it, and you have the arsenic You scream, you're made You're drunk with rage Sorry, I can't be sad Tears haven't left my eyes, it's not my age Theres no knife... There's no vial I've been living this life For quite a while. And though there's no door, And all the angels are on the floor; I'm going to live the way I like There's no reason to take part in your lie
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I can't believe you wrote that in minutes..its AMAZINGLY GOOD. You should write more stuff. It made me think alot :)