Leaving

i wrote this for english class.......what do u think? Leaving I cant go back, I will not leave. If I return, I admit defeat. I need some space, some room to breathe; I want to see where this road leads. You’ve done this to me before You forced me to go away I had to leave it all behind You didn’t listen to what I had to say This time, however, it’s different. I feel this is where I belong. So again you’ve taken your cheap shot, But you still pretend nothing’s wrong. I know what goes on inside your mind I am happy, which you don’t like. I make friends, you ask to move. You always do this, just out of spite.
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thats pretty good..~ash~
its awsome!...im adding you so I can return when you do have poems...I love poems...mostly morbid ones..but any kind I like alot....

Matt
thats really good..post more..I love to see poems
I really liked your poem, it's very good. Well done!!
[Anonymous]
brandi i get it you wrote it for me. im sorry for every thing, i need you now more than ever.