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by forgetmenot on April 15th 2006, 12:00AM

so. i need to know if this story is shit or not. give me comments if you think that it sucks or rocks. love you all!

Hmmm.. I'd say you need longer chapters, and it might be wise to revise more as well. Otherwise, this is the beginning of a great story.
~scarletrain~

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