Holding On

Listening to: Staind - Epiphany
Feeling: bleh
This is my most recent poem *nods* I don't think I need to tell you what made me write it...
HOLDING ON The world’s asleep Their sun has set I’m wide-awake I can’t forget I wish I could Oh how I’ve tried To make it leave My dying mind So many times I’ve stayed awake For sleep won’t come To take away The endless drone Of piercing pain And lead me to A better place A fairytale A land of dreams Where I can’t cry Where I can’t scream And in this place (Where I can rest And rip the heartbreak From my chest) These wounds so deep Can slowly heal And open cuts Can close and seal And as I stand Under the sky I let the rain Run down my spine I turn around And see you there As if you’ve answered All my prayers And in that moment I can feel The love that once Had felt so real I felt alive I felt so strong I knew that none Could prove us wrong But someone took Away my trust And my heart crumbled Into dust I have not felt The same since then Together could we Start again? Although sometimes It really hurts To look at you And not see her If dreams come true And wishes live I hope one day I can forgive So just for now I will hold on Even if It’s not for long.
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I loved it, i really have no words to discribe the feelings that i felt when i read it. but it was a good thing cause i felt like a connection with you, creepy?-not really. i enjoyed reading your poem, Beautifully deep.
-a Forgotten Memory
well thank you, So i think you and i couls be friends...what about you?
wow, that really just explained my relationship! you're awesome. *is jealous*
Yeah i would love to be, nah i wouldnt joke around like that, its kinda pointless.
awesome
like it... alot...
great poem..
one of my favorites from now on..
keep writing!!!
adding u to my friends