poem

YOu tell me that you love me Theres a fire in your eyes Not a fire of love but a reminder of all your lies Played me for the fool only im the one who knows how the game is played I know all the rules You think Im just a girl who doesnt have a clue who loves you unconditionally who thinks our love is true the story lies beyond this for a bout a million miles I have nothing more than a million broken smiles Beat me with your ego YOu know it gets to me But what does it matter When your the only one who sees? See's the power that you hold is just way to cope with all the pain you hold inside of a past of all lost hopes Okay this isnt done yet but tell me what you think okay?
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thats pretty good =)
ha i suck at writing. i just have lil idea i dint write that by the way its just lyrics to some song...

so yours IS better