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Feeling: vain
my mind screams, my heart races and these tears bur n unforgetable pain under the beauty and hate of a darkened sky lost in the moment that no longer holds you and i and i can't find myself again half hearted broken soul is all i see tormented and trapt incomplete in every way falling and breaking into pieces every moment trying to pick herself up and mend them together lost and confused in a life not worth living where reality seems less than real. and i can't forgive the moment you slipped away was it her shy innocent simple ways were you to good. to above her realizing time and love meant nothing to you. then tore a heart in half for no reason knowing you were the cause of all those scars the reason her eyes are dark and lonely deserving much better. close your eyes. and end this nightmare
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Hey! I like it, it suits you better. your poem was good, dark. Nice pic :)
i love you
-mike
[Anonymous]
lol thank you thank you Jordie you're too kind. I'm doing allright, just laying back waiting for college..eughh I hate school. Hockey is back too so that's a plus and I haven't been on the computer all that much, I've been writing more and just relaxin' haha. How are you?