~Chapter 1~

She knew that today would be like any other but there was something so special in the air that day that she couldn't help but be cheerful. She went to her parents chambers to make sure they were there. "Hello Mother, Hello Father" Abigail said as she kissed their cheeks. "Hello Dear" They both said not looking at her. They just sat there doing paper work and talking to the men around them. "Are you two going to do this all day?" She asked "Of course we are the sooner we get this rubbish over and done with the better."Her Father said. "Well Ok, I'll be in the garden all day" She said with a smile. "Have fun darling" Her Mother said. She loved her parents, but they never paid much attention to her, after all they did have a country to take care of. Her Father was a huge man with a white beard and barely any hair on his head. He loved wearing his robe and crown all day and yelling at anyone in sight. Her Mother was a beauty and she sometimes wondered how her Father ever managed to get her. Her Mother had red hair but it was starting to fade. Her Mother has sparkling green eyes that she had passed on to Abigail. She got her looks from her Mother. Abigail went out of the room closing the huge doors behind her. She ran down the hall and grabbed a hoated cloak and put it on. She then hurried outside trying not to be spotted. She then ran to the front gates of the castle and ran out. No one had saw her, she's free for the day! She walked down the street and looked at all the people, all the proverty, and all the great merchants. It saddened her to see all the people begging her for change in the streets. If she had some she would have given them some money for bread, or maybe even a chicken leg, but she had none. As she stared at all the great foods she began to feel hungry but knew she had no money to pay for it. She didn't want to go back to the palace so soon because she had never been in the village before and wanted to experience it for herself. She then took off her cloak and held it underneath her arm. She had borrowed her maid's dress so she would fit in with the surroundings. Just then someone ran into her and knocked her over. "Are you alright?" A man stood above her holding his hand out to help her up. She took his hand and got up. "Yes I'm alright, why weren't you watching where you were going?" She said. "I was..." He said nothing he just starred at her. "May I ask why you are starring at me?" "Oh I'm sorry I didn't mean to. Please don't think ill of me it's just..." "No I do not think ill of you, just watch where you are going next time. Good day sir." She walked away hoping he'd follow her. He just stood there watching her. She sighed knowing nothing would come of it. He was the most handsome man she has ever seen in her life and she acting as if he were one of her servants. Just as she had given up hope he walked up infront of her. She grabs her chest. "Sir, you gave me a fright." "I'm sorry my Lady I just did not want to walk away without knowing a beauties name." "My name ,dear Sir, is Abigail, now will you excuse me" She walks around him. "Luke." She stops and turns around. "My name is Luke. You seemed to have forgotten to ask me my name." He said "I did not forget to ask you." She walks away wishing she wouldn't of been so cruel. She had been in the palace so long that she had seemed to forget how to treat people who do not work for her parents. She sees a small alley way to walk through to get to the other side of town and decides to go that way. As she starts to walk through it she starts to get scared. There were rats, garbage and it was so dark that she can't see the sun. She started to hurry but is stopped by a big tall man. "Hello there." The Man says "Hello, will you excuse me please?" "Such kindness, yet when my brother talked to you,you were mean as a snake." "Your brother?" "Luke." "Oh, him, I'm sorry Sir I did not realize." "Oh don't worry just do one thing for me and my men and we will forget all about it." Five other men come behind him smiling with rotten teeth. She starts to back up but they keep coming forward. "What would you like me to do? Clean for you? Cook for you?" Abigail says to the man. "No, we want you to be our whore. Dance for us, and pleasure us, and we'll be even." Abigail's face turns pale and she started to run the other way. The men ran after her and she is no match for the men. Luke appeared out of no where and grabbed her. "Leave her alone brother, she ment me no harm." Luke says. "Oh come on we just wanted to have alittle fun with her." "Not today, go home!" The men moan and start walking away. Luke looks down at Abigail who is holding on to him and crying on his shoulder. He picks her up hoping she won't mind. "Where do you live?" Luke asked. "Don't worry about it, I can find it there on my own." "No I'm taking you home they will look for you if Im not with you." "If I tell you, you promise not to say anything?" "Yes, I promise." "I live in the palace." Luke looked shocked because he knew that the King and Queen had a daughter named Abigail. He took her back to the front gates of the palace and by then it was dark out. He set her down on her feet. "Thank you for taking me home." "It was my pleasure." "Remember you promised you wouldn't tell." "I know I promise." "Goodnight Luke." "Goodnight Princess Abigail." She smiled and ran up to the palace. Luke watched her untill he could no longer see her and started walking back to the village. When Abigail reached the palace she went to her bedroom and laid down on her bed. She smiled and thought of Luke's blacker then black hair and his big blue eyes. He had dimples when he smiled and she adored them. She grabbed her pillow holding it as she had held Luke when he saved her. His muscles were very built and she wanted to hold on to them again. "Yes, I think I will go into the village again tomorrow." She said before she fell asleep still holding the pillow tight.
Read 58 comments
Oh cool so am I haha.
yeah you rote the same comment in here like 3 tymes...lol but thats okay...hummmm i'm really bored good mornign...lol its 12:11 am where i live how about you???
[Anonymous]
geez haha thanks a lot.
Hahah wow, i'm glad you liked it so much thanks a lot I just wrote it cuz I was pissed off.
hey cool diary!
Yeah just uh drop the c haha. K ill try to keep it up, thanks again.
k kool. I read some of your story... I liked. If I ever have to write a novel...ahha forget it.
oh thats really cool... I iwsh I could write a book... but I am too lazy to... good luck!! (on ur book)
thanks!!
You write very differently in the comments then when you write your story.
haha contact you.
haha however you wanna write whatever
okay haha its a deal
So how many chapters does your story have?
Haha yeah whatever is your preference you know. Are you irish?
Yeah haha silly me that's how it's supposed to be sorry haha
yeah i get along wit them but idk sometimes i get a litttle sick of them cuz there like the only frends that i have..well i feel that way sometimes ne wayz yah now???
jayme
[Anonymous]
haha "damn straight"
haha whoa...you're a lot of things..
Hey!..thanx for the comment, you're diary is awesome!..well ttyl..byez!!


-Jordan-
[Anonymous]
lol!! I obviously chose sooner...

- surfergrl01
[Anonymous]
ummm sure...if you want? haha. Yep it's a good thing.
haha ... yeah
- surfergrl01
[Anonymous]
is your story a love story?
haha yeah your right silly me again. Hot and heavy already? its only the second chapter!ahha i guess that's why it's a private entry.
ohhhh ok i get it, your editing it. Whne did you first start writing?
both..if you dont mind.
oh...cool.
k cool when you do I'll read it.
Haha don't worry about me, I can handle anything.
thanks that very nice of you
[Anonymous]
ur welcome!
more,more,more...i love it...it's great sooo far.....when are you gonna rite more...i can't wait just let me know when ur done wit the 2nd chapter!!!
ttyl,
Jayme
[Anonymous]
I read it, and I like it!

[mexico]
[Anonymous]
OKAY THATS GOOD CUZ I DONT WANT TO CHK THIS THING EVERY TIME I GET ON HERE WITCH IS LIKE 2 TYMES A DAY!!!LOL WELL TTYL,
JAYME
[Anonymous]
yeah i'm really bored...i mis my b.f sooo much....lol well i can't see him till tuesday...tear.........lol well ttyl,
Jayme
[Anonymous]
thats okay..hummmm easter break stinx well i got to talk to him today...and dads not goin to be home tomorrow soo i'l see if i can talk to him tommorow too that'd be great...i luv him sooo much...are you singel????
jayme
[Anonymous]
kool!!! well i don't think that relationships last after 'taking a break' cuz idk..tryed it once and it just didn't work at all!!!!
ttyl,
jayme
[Anonymous]
haha no...i heard it kills them...:-( but i wish to tip a goat one day!
[Anonymous]
i SHALL read your story. i'm beginning on mine right now. by the by, cute diary!
[Anonymous]
squared? like an exponent? or am i a square? yes, i am. haha, i'm such an idiot...
[Anonymous]
whoo, i know. i'm awesome. i think i'll add story diaries as friends... yep, i think i will. whoohoo, you're the first friend i'm adding, ok? ok, awesome.
[Anonymous]
thanks yours too my diary isnt really i diary i mean u can call it that but its mostly a story i guess u can say from when my dad died to know
[Anonymous]
i noticed, that's why i decided to do it. i steal ideas. i'm a robber. i'm a criminal...!!
[Anonymous]
omG, i'm so sorry! i'm a criminal, kill me! haha
[Anonymous]
Your story has a great begining! Keep writing I really like it!

-Steph
[Anonymous]
aw, sweet. :]
[Anonymous]
thank you soo much! its really nice to have someone i lost all my friends after my dad died i didnt want to see anyone and clearly nobody wanted to see him because i became a whole differnet person i dont go to school cause i get tutored here. its nice to have a friend

Layla
[Anonymous]
thanks you soo much again whats ur name? im Layla. aol broke in me so were in the process of fixing it! your soo nice thanks for everything and when i need a friend its nice to have you
[Anonymous]
ohh ok I will! Thanks umm soo where do u live! I live in Okland california have u ever seen laguna beach on mtv, well im about an hour away!
[Anonymous]
LOVE the story so far!
seriously its totalli cute
the only thing is part of its written in like past tense and part of it is in present tense....(wow i just sounded like an english teacher lol) but besides that its sooo cute so far! i cant wait to read more!!
yea its really nice here i dont get out much but the weather has been rainy but i really like it here! I went to pitsburg once, only to get on a plance but i guess it still counts lol

layla
[Anonymous]
im sure that u would like it most people do! fun in the sun nd all attracks most people
[Anonymous]
Thanks for the compliment on my diary. I like your too ^_^
haha well i hope u get there someday well i have to play my tape u'll know what that means if u read my entry im gonna go to bed talk to u tomorrow tho thanks again,

Layla
[Anonymous]
yup but that stix..cuz i actually liked my x a lot..but he just stopped talking to me and then we started to like each other again..but idk it just wasn't the same...ya know...well it stix when that happens but oh well i have some one now...lol i luv em...lol well
ttyl,
jayme
[Anonymous]
okay goodnight
[Anonymous]
yup i guess soo i hope you get the guy back..only if ur happy..we get along too well sometimes..were always picking on each other..but next marking period we have gym together...don't know how well thats gonna work out cuz he'll be around all of his friends...hummmm idk..but honestly idc either as long as i'm wit him!!! lol well
ttyl,
jayme
[Anonymous]
ur soo confident...lol its a good thing tho...but other then him do you get along wit ur rents and stuff???
ttyl,
jayme
[Anonymous]