After the Battle

Tired I can feel my body,burnt,battered and fired I put down My blood ridden axe I see all the facts My axe Azaroth remains alys so true When in use it feels so new Like rejuvenated Killing everyone who had alienated I killed all who I hated With each kill a memory is faded Evaded I ponder My imagination wanders Is this it? I mean I know I can not quit Time going fast as I sit I run my finger on Azaroth's blade In my greif I sjall not wade But prepare myself for all is to come How they greet me in a great sum I can Hear them yelling God,I fear is not there to hear me telling.... That all I wish is to be alone In my dark,damp castle no technology or phone For if I did,who would I talk to For noone is there to have things to do If I did I would feel a fool To let mere emotions rule over me This cannot be If I did though, safe would be humanity Quite the costs indeed To be accepted,I must sucumb to human needs Why,how can this be? All this so my enemies can have peace...
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Hmm.. Interesting.
Hm..yeah I guess it is funny the slug thing come to think of it. Your poems are always interesting I really do like'em.
all i have to say is WOW
--mae
[Anonymous]
what do you mean when you say "so its you hmm??" who are you?

frkinyoureyes
[Anonymous]
so i can't just have a lil bit of rhia?...just a piece? break me off some...yo.
[Anonymous]
Hey really killer poem...been there.
-SweetMadness
[Anonymous]
this is really good. i liked reading it. but...yeah, =( thanks for the note...unfortunatly my dad gets away with a lot of things...
[Anonymous]
why aren't you online, lover?

where's summer too? why have i no friends online!?

arg
i like your entries... but who are you?! why do you say You again,yes!My plan is coming together perfectly(loud cackling).......... what is that about...? kinda scary.
do you know me? cuz if you do... thats weird. haha
hey...thanks.

i just now saw the pic on ur heading thing...what is that? is it just scars of cutting??? cuz i have those...im not sure what they are...but yeah... -shrugs- =( i was just wondering
[Anonymous]
okay man... this is all fun and stuff.. but who are you?
i like this one too.

normally im not a big fan of rhymers, but your writing flows.

anyway. enough with me and my cliché remarks.

taaaaaaake care,

--t(s)a(k)r(l)a(a)(r)
well geez, thanks for the comments... very nice of you. and pardon my innocence, but i'm not even sure what a "jay" is, although i'm gonna guess it's a joint. oh yeah, 'cause joint starts with j... hmm. but yeah. i think i'll pass on the jay. thanks though... and did you scar yourself in that pic? if so, hardcore man. rock. if not... then wow, what a crazy coincidence that they happen to form perpendicular lines. yep. bye!