*Does This Coffin Make Me Look Fat?*

lol, my dad came up with the hilarious name...i just HAD to use it so here it is: Spiders flee before me Setting off all my emotions Locked up behind twenty iron bars Everybody passes, glancing only once Nobody seems to care That I'm all alone in here (Chorus) This vacant desert adjoining me Swallows me up as a whole Captures me in its grasp But everyone overlooking me Is far gone from my soul In their own little sanctuary Lives are slaughtered around me The iron maiden gets the job done I'm almost up next in line Who can save me now? The clown just looks down at me and smiles His red make-up dripping upon my grimace Reminds me of the blood I'm about to face What's the point of living, breathing, existing If just to finish it, I could clutch the blade? (Chorus)
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LoL
like i said on AIM...dude
this is like definitely a 9.8
LoL
it was better than a 9.5 but not a 10...so i picked in between...
but hell that's still AWESOME!

you've gotten a HELL lot better at this!
so congrats to you!

l8er
xoxo
i don't really get the last 2 lines........*weird, confused, and oblivious face*....might wanna work on that...otherwise...i liked it! i liked the part where the clown's face paint was dripping and reminded you of the blood you were going to face...KOOLIE...lol

Much ♥
ChelS
SPIDERS FLEE BEFORE IT...
IT ALL FITS!
THE THING IN THE CHAMBER OF SECRETS
IS A BASILISK!

zomg.
YAY!

harry potter is my life. it's pretty sad, actually. i relate EVERYTHING to it.
My Chemical Romance is awesome (:
lol, that is very weird o_O