*The Death Train*

Verse 1 The sun lingers down the alley Moving faster and faster to the victim As you inch toward the edge of the platform An erie sound conceals the sweet words of the monster Calling out death's name Chorus Any move you make Fire may capture you Leaving scars of memories That stain forever Verse 2 Halucination shows your lifeless body As it will become with the use of one muscle Torn flesh, broken bones, and dirt sprawled around you Yet you laugh in the face of evil Happy for it to have ended your useless life Chorus Any move you make Fire may capture you Leaving scars of memories That stain forever -graham came up with the song name, woot, and i was able to like talk about stepping infront of a train to end your life...*suicide by train, lol* cuz in the alice books i've read, a girl killed herself that way...and then another book i've read recently *fat kid rules the world* he was about to step infront of the subway and kill himself... so yeah, i knew i could make this into a song
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dude that is awesome!!!

oh you spelled hallucinations wrong :D

but dude that is a 9 and the whole suicide thing is awesome too! well no not the actual suicide thing, i mean the......damn it you know what i mean :D
i had poppy tarts this morning so mind me plz :D

but anyhow that was awesome

l8er

xoxo