*My Gift*

Stop breaking my broken heart I can't bear to see you cry anymore I wish my song was your remedy But you just keep on crying Keep on hiding How can I kiss it and make it all better? Look into my glazed eyes I want to feel what you're feeling We could die beautifully together if you wanted Just let me know when you're sane. Forget all the others and feed off my happiness Hug me till the sun comes up I promise you it'll never go down again But only if you accept this gift I have to offer Not finished yet... ♥ Bri
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loll aww. me like it though. lol. lots of adjectives.
but its more like a story again. lol.

but i guess we can have some poem-like songs and some story-like songs. lol

but i like the start of it :D
On a scale of 1-10 so far, 9...It actually tells a story of how you want to understand someone whose going through a hard time, and everyone feels that emotion at one point and time in their lives...This has GREAT potential!! Keep workin on it :)