i consider this my best poem...its still not good

Listening to: PGA golf (HELP ME)
Her face was in the magazine I saw it; I adored it. But this is not her (as I know her) I know her face; her personality. She has no selfish thoughts Or feelings. She’s concerned Not with herself, but others. She does not worry herself with Clothes, or hair, or make-up [yet] (she is beautiful) She worries about the well being of her friends Or family, or acquaintances. I see nothing but radiance In her face I see only her caring Concerned and compassionate Mind at work. And that is beautiful
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