sitting alone ..........

Sitting alone in the dark Does no good for someone who broke there heart Sitting in the beams of the moon Whishing away their life is a pathetic and pointless game We all still sit in our pity We don't live forever and still Life has to bring us down Playing with emotions is a cruel toy and though life is the short it is the longest thing to live through And in the end good lives or bad we still ................All Die...................... Yeah i'm not great at writing poetry but i felt like it so you can say it sucks ..it probably does :)
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Don't worry! It's an above average poem... then again I would probably make a bad poetry critic... I've always prefered rhyming ones myself... I don't think I could do a free verse... weird...

I believe one of my friends would say...

"It's pretty good... and by good I mean goth"

well at least that's what he says about all of mine anyways...

peace and love...
-Adolfo-