get over it

by yournamehere
so you want to hear my history? bullshit friends, lies, and deciet you want to know my memories, tear soaked tissues and bloody sleeves broken promises and spineles confidantes lonely nights i tried to hide it missing memories hardly half spent kill myself from that one moment your fucking lies left me so lonely its about time to get the fuck over it so smoke that cigarette you lit lick up the poison that you spit build yourself an ocean of pity and then drown in it let me know what you think, please?
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oh my gosh!! thats so awesome!!
your welcome & keep writing...you should get some published.
Peace & love, Freggie
im going to add you to my friends list, so i can come read your poetry...if that's ok with you.
Peace & love, Freggie
did you write that? i luv it.
I like it...you're a good writer
dude, you write really well. that poem is just awesome. and so are the others ones that i read. you got some wicked talent. peace & love, Freggie
wow. Its amazing.
[gentlegoodbye]
[Anonymous]
Wow, that's good.
[Anonymous]
Very good! Beautiful!
There's a definate rhythm to it. And that's always a good thing. I'm really feeling the words.

You're very, very talented. ^^ Very very VERY talented. (On a side note..you got the definition of copacetic correct. Even if you cheated. ^_-)
if your not writing lyrics for bands yet... start... you have a talent. go with it. you can make something of yourself. dont wait for the approtonity to come... go find it.
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