25 ~ Poetic Pieces

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Oi, here's some new crappy poetry for those who like to read and laugh at amateur poetry ^^ First one is called "Moon Princess"... hm... I started this a while ago, so I don't remember where I got the inspiration from =P. Second one is named "Endless Waltz". I was inspired by this while lying in the dark in bed one night, listening to an orchestral piece called "Sweetheart Story" by S.E.N.S. I finished writing this piece within 5 min of starting it cause I had all the inspiration I needed to write a short piece. Anyways, here they are, both of them haven't really been edited much so if you have comments, suggestions, flaming, please do so ^^ I'm always looking to improve =P Happy Reading~~ (both works are completely original by me, but of course, with some cliche and overused phrases -_-;;) --------------------------------------------- "Moon Princess" Each new phase of the moon shows A new test: A test of fidelty, Of Courage, of Loyalty; But above all, A test of true love. In each of our own eyes, we see princesses Emitting auras of bliss and harmony; They are the white on black, Just like the moon hanging in the night sky. The moon orbits the Earth, Always around, always near, But never quite there; never will these two come together To collide and expose themselves to one another. And yet, even so far away, the moon only Shows one side of itself. One side - the side we all see, The external shell, the physical looks; and the other, kept hidden in the dark Away from prying eyes, Never to be revealed even to the closest ones. We see, but do not understand; We hear, but do not understand; We touch, but do not understand; We interpret, but do not understand. All these masks covering the truth, But we can only hope that what we see Is what really stands. We can only guess what lies on The back of the moon. Nonetheless, Now, with this soft and beautiful symbol in the sky Looking at the beautiful and soft moon hanging there Through all these thoughts and troubles by my side, My own princess. --------------------------------------------- "Endless Waltz" Won't you dance with me? I'll take you in my arms And twirl to this sweet melody That envelops and melts us into each other. Let's stay together, bound by This love, who's end comes only When this song stops This world from spinning, When the stars stop sparkling On this night, when The Candles burn to the last Piece of wick left, When everything disappears And falls away beneath our feet. Only then will our bonds be broken, But until that time, Won't you dance with me To this endless waltz?
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Those are really good. I like them a lot.
Yeah, the normal song sums up my ideas on life too, that's why I posted it.
btw, yes, I play the drums, but not very well. What do you like to do? Other than write these really good poems, that is...
[Anonymous]
Okay Chris Tmas, rugby fiend extraordinaire, I started reading that second poem because you said you were in bed in the dark and that's where I am right now. Then I stopped reading after the first stanza because I thought it was going to break my heart. So I'll read them both in full at a later date.

Yes.
[Anonymous]
haha thanksss.
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