#08

by tomorrowstrish
Listening to: Sum 41- bitter edge
Feeling: alright
If love could change the way things are you would live forever and go so far Youd knw that I am alwayz there That Ill alwayz love you Ill alwayz care But love cant change the way thingz are Or stop your pain or mend your scarz I hope that love can let you know Not to give up or ever let go Even when your not in sight Your in my thoughts day and night Love is what will keep you there And make me thankful for all we shared i made thiz for my sister witch she died a week in a hlph ago ill allwayz miss her wit all my heart shez loved even tho i cant express it ... RIP June 29th 2005 plzz coment
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oh, so you're using me?
I love them I really like number 2 the most if you want you can read some of mine just find the diary ( lily )
hey..
i think theyre really good!
youve def. got talent, keep it up.

:)

well life goes on...not sure what to say im not good with this shit...little to close to home.
cool cool really tochy feely and sweet i like them keep up the work
[Anonymous]
thats really sweet...sorry to hear about you sister.
So do you Trish!


Have a fabulous day!!

:)
dont mind me, i'm just in an odd mood. what i think of your poems: they remind me of the poems i used to write when i was 14/15. i dont know, good, i'm just not really into rhyming anymore. but honestly, pretty good.
wow ur a really go0d writter ..
i write myself!
-LauRa
Sure you can add me, I'll add you too. Keep in touch and take it easy, okay? If you need something, I'm here.

-Sarah
Awww... I'm so sorry about your sister. You're so young to be going through something like this. I'm so sorry.


But I like BAM MARGERRA too.

♥ Sarah
i like alot.
[Anonymous]
yah thas fine ... thx i dont kno very many ppl on here .. ur really good tho
[Anonymous]
Hey, but if you ever need anything, I'm here, k?
hey. i like ur poems they are so cute .. did u make them ur self?
[Anonymous]
it doesnt sound gay...i dont think yew need to work on anything but i dont write so i dont know really...

danielle(can i add yew??)
Hey trishs this poem is very good its sad but sweet at the same time keep up the good work email me if you want or need to talk or whatever alycia4588@hotmail.com I m very soory for your loss i lost 2 friends over the past years and a clasmate died this year im here if you need to talk my aol screenname is silent tears cut
wow.... im sorry to hear that *gives hug*
wow that was really sweet*tears*
i like yewr peoms!!!
why did yew want me to read them??

danielle