#20

Feeling: moodless
I thought of dying gazing into the black seductive ice water so glassy and so tranquil I thought of dying but in my place Deaths bony embrace clutched listless children gnawed by hunger prisoners on death row detritus of their own childhoods poor shepherds grazing blunt-toothed animals on landmined hillsides I thought of dying to throw myself away so much landfill If its no use to me I could give it I can holler with my lungs at injustice join hands in protest at brutality I realized that I had long been dead but I could choose instead to reawake and be alive for them coment plzz
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YOU'VE BEEN HIT WITH MY SEXY BUNNY!! which means you either sound hawt or look hawt!! congradulations!!
[Anonymous]
Hey, love the poems... they're pretty kool in my opinion... much love ~Xtina~
You have awesome taste in music, though I could do without the AC/DC.. oh well. Your poems are amazing too. As a fellow poet, I leave you this advise... "If you will it, it will happen. If you wish it, it will come true. If it makes you cry, write about it, but that doesn't make the pain go away." These are my words to you. Do right by them.
You are REALLY good hun! You hav such a wonderful talent!

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good, yet juvenile. focus on other things but self pity and sadness, i mean like rage anger lust and loathing... there are so many other emotions!
[Anonymous]
yea i like ur stuff. writing poems when your in a weird mood, angry, sad, whatever, can bring out stuff that you want to say that you never thought you had in you. good stuff. i like :)
[Anonymous]
nice peoms i wish i had a tanlent in something lol