#09

Listening to: weezer-bev. hillz
Feeling: accepted
it waz all you how you took my life and all i an do is ask why all you wanted was my body it was just your little toy you knew i was too scared of you you called me a stupid little gurl you pushed me around made me become your slave i wanted to tell mommy but you said only i was to blame i will alwayz remember the first time it happen everybody that heard just kept dancing you slapped my face and tied me to the bed you said it was just a lil kinky then why did i wish i was dead after it waz over you drove me away you took me to the ocean you said it was are special place and as i sat there in the sand i knew it waz all part of your plan i knew i wouldnt run we stayed there till we saw the sun that waznt the last time it has happen many more and everytime i feel like your stupid little pawn now i am here all alone called a slut for wht i have done no one to love me and all you do is just make fun my body is now lost forever in tht sea the one you took me to after everytime you had me bleed. coment plzz
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OMG! Did that REALLY happen to you? You are good but omg, that is HORRIBLE! I am SO sorry hun. If you EVER need to talk, email me at liltwistedfreak77@yahoo.com

PLEASE!
Yeah, deff add me, I will add you 2! And I will comment on every poem!

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Hey, thanks for the add hun. I will read them at some point tomorrow. good night!

:)
thats deep.
good job.
i like it.
[Anonymous]
1) I hope this didnt happen to you.

2) http://www.eliteskills.com (where I write my poems, you might like it).

Three) Keep it up. Your poem is good but you MAY want to try writing with correct grammar and spelling of words to make people appreciate you more. This is an adult poem with adult feelings....make it look adult.

Overall kick-arse job!

--Kayla
wow...i really like them...you got talent...lol...leave me one...
thats a good one

thats reeeeally good!!♥♥?

♥ Valerie
[Anonymous]

thats rrrrrrrrlllllllly good

&hearts valerie
vaberz22♥
[Anonymous]
[Anonymous]
that is really really good.. but it is deep.. i hope that didnt happen to you.. well if you want too add me and i will add you..
[Anonymous]
Umm this is a excitlent poems I relate to it so it tuched home hard. your taleted !!!