#13

Feeling: alive
so what if im not perfect and never will be lifes hard so sit me free in your eyes i see me a slut a whore nothin more , but i dont really care what you think of me or anyone else ,the only person i truely ever judge is you , you say im nothin and never will be , well sorry hun wait and see , i still got life in my hands, dreams to plan . But unlike you , i dont see you a cop, teatche, vet , nothing like that. only you makeing food washing dishies ive messed up in my life sure , but i still got time i can fix wrong to right with out a fight , see i got goalz and the first one is to never be like you i dont need beer its a waiste of time and more then a dime so go grab a beer while i go make something of me in time and not sit home like you do all day.. bout my mom ~ itz not really good coment to plzz im trying harder on my typeing...
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its good but not really a poem yet it could be in the future
It almost seems like you're going for a prose set up. Very cool.
Cheers,
Scarlett
its really good and very deep, i liked it.
[Anonymous]