#26

by tomorrowstrish
Feeling: lousy
To whom it may concern Red is pretty So is blue I didnt know which to use to write to you My life was short And now my spirit is free I cut myself loose from my misery I was lonely and hurt too I didnt know who to turn to Have a little faith they say But faith didnt go a long way I was confused and didn't understand I just wanted someone to hold my hand To help me through my rough times To stop me from committing such a crime My wasted youth is now gone. But there are others who are not strong So please look and see That theyll need help just like me coment plzz
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very true
i like ur poem/quote. its real good. did u make it urself? ~Neen~
not bad, dunno why my opinion should mean much. i admire the part about free spirit. however i disagree with wasted youth (judging based on your age as listed on your site). youth cannot be wasted because it is our experiences in youth that make us who we will become. nothings ever wasted, at least i like to think so ;)

peace,
rawt
[Anonymous]
Very nice poem!
Very nice!! i luv it!! that is amazing how u can come up with that! good job! it is fantasic!
Sophie
your poems are pro...keep it up

*gives you props*
that is beautiful
ahhh i love your poems! they are so...

GOOD! :)

[luvablelushh]
[Anonymous]
hey hey im goin away(just thought i'd let ya know) read my entry to see where
omfg i love your poem!!! it is pretty damn awsome...yupp..its kool..AND I LOVE YOUR BACKROUND IT IS SO CUTE =d
your very welcome =D
i don't really understand why you run all over the site asking people to read your poems. all you want is for people to tell you it's a great poem and that you're a fabulous writer.

the poem is weak. there's no structure. very cliche content. weak analogies. sometimes that works, but not here. it's like a sad-sorry-emo poem on crack.

you're just like everybody else.