Listening to: Penny Lane-The Beatles
Im Trying to tell you something
i can't get it off my chest
i know i'll fail but ill still do my best
I keep on trying to say the words
but they get stuck somewhere in my throat
My words turned into letter i wrote.
I tried hard to say the words
I wrote them down on my hand
Just to not forget where i stand.
When i looked at you
did you look too?
When i looked again
Did you know who looked at you?
I rehearsed the words to make sure i knew
So that every word i said sounded true
Made sure the eye contact was perfect
to be honest, from you
i don't know what to expect.
Never had time looking behind
coz i kept looking at you
When you looked...you never mind
Why was that?
did you like me as i like you?
Was everything coming out
of your eyes true?
did you like me 2?
I tried hard to say the words
I wrote them down on my hand
Just to not forget where i stand
When i looked at you
did you look too?
When i looked again
Did u know who looked at you?(looked at you?)
I hope You knew it was me. (it was me)
i hope you don't care
if i could just stare
for one more minute...
Note: i think this is the best song ive written and i love it..i sincerly do..
Your lyrics are really good! The only thing I would say is don't worry about rhyming so much, that can sound kind of dumb when it's actually sung. But the words make an impact =] Better than anything I've written anyway.
♥
Jen
romina.
[rororo]