How scared i am of the ocean

Feeling: compassionate
the acoustics in the back ground and the ocean is on the kill and goin down like the sea's to the rift of sounds the sands are sinking around my ankles your voice carries like the waves and a scream betroves my heart as a ship gets away drowned deep in the hole and passed over by the sails left alone in the cold and it goes down with my soul and dammit i dont wanna go down like this and i cant hold my own breath let alone yours in my fist let me go and sink to my death i know i cant keep it together but i got the water and i play till the bottom untill i last saw her she looks down to me the bubbles carry my tune up but the cold turns them bitter and i go through agony and you dont see me
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wow..I like that...alot..<3

props
Did you write that? That is very good. And is that you in the picture? Love the hair!

:)
nice diary!!!!!!! I like it alot!
NATE! i miss you! we need to hang out
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i love this poem. its really good ♥
yea, seriously, ever time i call, you're never home :[ i miss us talking about the time! its sad :[
call me when you get the chance
love you oodles
Hey
lol thanks, i appreciate the comment. is that you in the entry header? your pretty if it is!! lol [yeah im odd..i use pretty as an adjective for guys, its basically the same thing as hott]. anyyway, are those poems you write or something? because they are good

anyway, ill stop bothering you with my randomness
i really like that. i just moved to cali so im fucking scared ass hell of the ocean
wow..i likkkke that... did you write it?
did u rigth taht??and is that picture u?
aww! that is so wonderfully written!