*invisible poem*

Listening to: gavin degraw~chariot
Feeling: happy
hey everybody! before i tell ya about my day i'm gonna tell u a poem i wrote and it's called invisible: i am the wind i see you, but you can't see me i pass you by without you realizing i'm there oh i'm the wind i'm nothing but air trying to get to you with all my might but you don't see me trying because i'm invisible to you i am water i slip through your grasp i escape to the floor, dry up, and disapear you see me but you're not looking if you were looking you'd see see what i'm feeling towards you but you don't see the feelings because i'm invisible to you i am an angel i follow you everywhere you go i help you when you fall i stand by you and wipe away your tears i touch your hand for comfort and help you through all the hard times but you don't see me with you because i'm invisible to you please comment on my poem and if u want tell me wut u think it means, i want to see if u can guess ;-) well today was really windy and it was so cool. i went to samana's house and then chelsea came over to samana's house so we just sat outside on samana's porch and talked and had the wind blowing and it was so cool. me and samana chose our classes to take for high school. on monday we're probably gonna try and go to mrs. combs, the guidance counsler, so we can ask a few questions that we have and stuff. i love my new haircut, it's so purty :-D hehe! well i'm gonna go, lyl! bye!
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I hate you for your hair...i really do...but i love your poem! and it is so true, cuz he never DOES notice you...his loss neways...
well LyLas! --Sam
[Anonymous]
hey, i heart ur poem...it's cOOlio...you're not talkin to me on aim rite now :'( idk where u r but i know what you're poems about tay tay *cough cough*...:)

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