A Golden Afternoon

Just like Alice with all her singing roses I sit among the blades and hum along to you. I lay in your rays and soak up the earth. My body becomes alive. The gold hits my face, and happiness floods through my veins like a drug. Your warmth caresses me and I am loved. I squint, blinded by your charm. In you, I am perfect. But the moment never lasts. All too soon you are gone. I chase after you, hoping to catch up to your fall behind the hill. The blackness creeps in, you disappear and I am alone. I am cold and shivering, lying in a heap in a field of knives. They cut into me like razors at my flesh. And I must rise, and find peace elsewhere.
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I wonder if i'll ever be able to leave procrastination behind. Hm.
I like the figurative language in your poem, even if I feel sad that you go through the second part.
it is good to have him and i am lucky. I don't know why i get the luck but i am glad anyway. :)
Thanks :] I certainly hope so :s
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