::potentially wasted::

i don't want this to be a teenage tragedy where you die hollow and swallow her whole and every tear she cries means nothing because it won't bring you back please don't kill her because once she was everything to me evan... evan she screams your name she dies in vain and you sit there on the other side staring back as she cries i hope you enjoyed your ride as you fed us all those lies you're so young and it's not worth dying for i thought she meant more than that to you please stay strong because i'm too young to die because i don't want to cry because an eye for an eye leaves the world blind and every eye that shuts makes it so much harder to find blue eyed baby, don't go crazy fucking stay here where i can see you blonde-haired maybe maybe yes or maybe not i'm not gonna sit by as you let your soul rot didn't mother ever tell you act wasted has not befell you potential means nothing if it's wasted and love means nothing if it's never tasted evan... evan she screams your name she dies in vain and you sit there on the other side staring back as she cries i hope you enjoyed your ride as you fed us all those lies
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whoa. That was a ride. Thanks for giving us the pleasure once again.

~Angel
no one is created equal. but all people have the same equal right to try to be what they want. some people want to be shallow and stupid and stay in the tidepools all of their lives. you cant change people, all you can do is accept them and try your best to make them see what you might see as wisdom.
-pixey
at the risk of sounding redundant, that was fucking awesome. i love your writing.

if you don't already have it, you should check out the album pretty on the inside by hole. your writing reminds me of the songs on there.
[Anonymous]
I wish I could write like that. Unfortunately I am not the poetry type. I can't write worth a shit, or so I think.
You could write your poetry on the walls in the padded room. I can draw pictures. How's that sound?

~Janet
[Anonymous]
thanks! I'm so glad I figured that out..that I rock. Now, I think I can really say I'm growing.
In response to your last post, I love it! You are SO hot!
[Anonymous]
I loved your last post. I think you're very pretty. You rock. * Bear Hug * I miss you.
[Anonymous]
Word.
Cheers.
hey no problem. i speak the truth.
[Anonymous]