Lovely Eyes (poem)

Listening to: Boa
Feeling: loved
A little background info on this one. This is probably my oldest of the poems I still have. It is also my favorite I've ever written!
Lovely Eyes Do you know the look? The love in her eyes Her cheeks perked up with happiness The smile that makes you return it The way she stares into your eyes Looking into your souls and beyond That look that warms your heart You feel like you're the only one in the world for her You are You are meant to be gazing upon one another Meant to be in love Meant to be everything to each other Time will tell your fate in this world But the look is yours To be held as your own forever and ever Never will her face cease to shimmer for me
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i love it!!!!!
-HeartInFlamesxx
[Anonymous]
aww thats so pretty. ;]
another very nice poem. Beautiful like the rest. :0)
Yeah I think it will be fun to have parts of songs as my titles. Maybe I should make people guess what the song is? :)
Have a great new years.
~janet
[Anonymous]
awww i love that!!! <33

well have a good new years eve... dont do anything too crazy
[Anonymous]
keep writing good songs, john! :] have a grest New year!

*el
[Anonymous]
yeah i didnt go to the protest thing yeah that hole nighter thing well it got in the way and my ride slet in but i still have a lot planed i 2 more partys to go to tonigt isnt going to be a great night and i think iam going to get closer to one of my friends cuz i got her two card and a burned cd that i disigned the cover yeah i looks so perfesaonal yeah thats for the comment your the best
-amanda
by the way that beautiful you have such wonderful ways at puting word into feelings
Your poems and songs and such are the greatest. You have such a natural pure talent, I'll never tire of ir. Keep smiling....
--Kayla
happy new year *hugs*
Happy New year! I hope you rang it in with lots of fun, and friends. :D
Love,
~Janet
[Anonymous]