1st try

Listening to: none
Feeling: twisted
yea dis is my first try at a poem tell me whatcha think... Untitled If I told you how I felt for you Would you look through me like you alwayz do If I asked you not to go away Would you ignore her pleas and stay Its the way you always seem to care Its the way you just stop and stare Its how you know how you make me feel Like all my secrets have been reveled It seems like loving you is what i fear As you wipe away this single tear I try to act like I never knew The only thing that matters is losing you
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im sorry i only have yahoo email.i can email it to you.no just go to my page and on my friands list it says "htmlandgraphix" then...hold on keep this and ill be right back.
[Anonymous]
you see purple monkeys eh? you better go to the doctor;-)
[Anonymous]
i know this sounds dumb but what does mkz mean?
[Anonymous]
ok there now you better change your password incase anyone read it...or incase i get mad at you..hee hee!jk.
[Anonymous]
aw !!..that really good!!
[Anonymous]
oOoOoOo i see... the reason y i have nieces is bc my youngest bro is like 9 ys older than me, ek! but it is nice havin lil kids around... the yawlayz make u laugh *RuBy*
[Anonymous]
i know blah blah blah blah blah its just blah blah blah blah and im also more blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah and better than you blah blah blah prettier blah blah blah, JK!!ok how can i help?if you want you can change your password real quik and give it to me, then ill log in to your account and put it in.or you can make a new diary real quik and ill put it in.
[Anonymous]
your welcome any time...let me tell you a story then i blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah tell me if im talking to much blah blah blah blah blah blah blah and thats how it went.hee hee!
[Anonymous]
hey youre a good poet!
[Anonymous]
i know haha... my nieces rule *kisses*
[Anonymous]
...then after you get to that diary, klik on the entry number 8.it says the code there.
[Anonymous]
WAIT DONT USE IT, IT DOESNT WORK ON UR DIARY.UGGH!
[Anonymous]
i dig your poem
hopen to read more
[Anonymous]
ya its gonna show up, just take out the stars like i asked then it will work.
[Anonymous]
oh ya and when i give it to you you have to put it in the box that you put all the stuff in (after you klik preferences).and take out all the little stars (*) in it too.
[Anonymous]
ok im gonna give you the code for it, but you have to erase it when your done so nobody will copy it ok?
[Anonymous]
how do i do...what?by the way next time you comment, klik "signed note"
[Anonymous]
thanx i like your diary too! hee like my pop ups?
[Anonymous]
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Yay for first poems. Yours is muy bueno :) and it rhymes. that's muy dificil. I hope you have a fabulous day. Holla now
[Anonymous]
awww thats a good poem..its really cute to...
-lonerwolf
[Anonymous]
thats a great poem, it kinda reminded me of how i feel for someone...
[Anonymous]
hehe, its otay :P
[Anonymous]
ouch, that hurt *cries*
[Anonymous]