Enter the Nightmare - #3

My body was filled with rage. The note that I read said that they took her, my girlfriend. The note was signed anonymous but I had a good idea who it was. I ran as fast as I could through the forest. But out of nowhere a witch jumped out of the bushes and tackled me to the ground. It was Noelle. “How did you survive that shot”? I asked. “I’m enchanted myself with a revival spell before you shot me”. She explained. “Hmmm, I was out smarted by you”. I said. Then I kicked her off of me and kept running. But she chased after me. Well I was running I yelled over my shoulder “what do you want from me?” Then she replied “revenge”. I knew I couldn’t kill her cause she probably still had that stupid revival enchantment. So I kept running towards the mountains. When I got into the caves I tried to lose her, but that was hopeless. So I ran to the cave that Wang was in. When I ran in I stopped dead in my tracks. There she was Sabrina my girlfriend tied to the wall. Noelle ran in shortly after ready to attack, but she ran back out of the cave for some reason. So I ran up to Sabrina and untied her. But then someone pushed a boulder in front of the exit. After that I heard an evil laugh. Then Sephiroth walked out from the shadows. “So you actually came,” he said. “I’LL KILL YOU!!!” I yell as I run at him. Even before I came in striking distance he pulled out his sword. I pulled out my Cerebrus and shot his hand clear off his arm. Now his sword lies across the room and he is kneeling on the ground surrounded by his own blood. I walked up to him put pointed my gun at his head. “Now where is Wang”? I asked him. “Wang isn’t the one you really want” he said. “He took Sabrina and trapped us both in here” I said. “No, that was Nightmare” he said. Then I pulled the trigger and shot three bullets into his head. I turn around to see Sabrina run and put her arms around me. I looked down and asked “are you alright?”. Then she looked up at me and answered “yes”. But there was still one problem, there was a boulder blocking the entrance.
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