Forsaken

Abashed to the winds For I have sinned My clothes tattered My stance staggered My body worn My spirit broken and torn I merely wait to die so I can die, to be reborn I feel the void surpassing me Like a meaningless entity All that will be left is a shell For unto the darkness I fell No matter how much I try to yell Noone cane hear me, as my body grows stale
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whee.. that was deep o.o
inxden1al
[Anonymous]
thanks. =D

-squirrel
[Anonymous]
conceited* is how you spell it correctly. jackass.

and its not conceited. if you dont comprehend a sentence then dont comment on it.

it must suck to be dumb.
[Anonymous]
That's really deep....did you write that?

*~~Marisa~~*
[Anonymous]
thanks. hahah.

-callie.
it's beautiful.
xx.
[Anonymous]
Wee poem! Good poem. I like.
awesome poem. you r such a good poet.
[Anonymous]
i miss you tigris.

- cantaloupeenthusiast
[Anonymous]