A Great Fall

by kyodai
Feeling: bleh
A long way down I see As I stand by the window on the 10th story Pondering what what it would be like Will I land on a car,a person or a spike On this starry night A I see the moon's light Would anyone hear the sound I make My belonging vagabonds would take As I lie split open on the street cause I've met my fate What if, What if I hesitate.. Maybe it's not too late.. Maybe I should wait Or would I want my entrails out for the world to know My blood,intestines, brainmatter and all to show I mean is it worth it Would the world see this deemed fit?
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Jello and whipped cream go good together:)
[Anonymous]
Happy Birthday in 13 days!
[Anonymous]
-Claps- Yay poem! And well you're one of the realllyyyy lucky ones. But then again a lot of people tell me I'm still too young Take care.
wow.. that's deep.
[Anonymous]
Hahaha.. oh thats funny.
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thats my note
-rhia
regarding your header pic... i'd go for the futile flapping. i'd still die, yes. but if i'm going to plummet to my death, i'd rather not go down in flames...
[as above, so below]

I dig the header pic. It should include the ball buster as well.

I checked out your webpage, too.
Diggin' that as well.
[needs a little more violence, though]

:)
Curtis
Allo Allo! J'adore ton journel! Merci pour ecrire' en mon journel! tu pouvas tomber... ;) l8r g8r
[Anonymous]
ITS ALIVEEEEEEE! (ryn hehe) a mi me GUSTA tu picture( i dunno how to say athat en espanol heeh) :)