some1 wanted me to post up the song that i wrote that i wuz talking about earlier. i warn u its not reeli all that good n its not quite finished but here's the lyrics-
Quarter of an inch away from the line of determination
Quarter of my life away to show my desolation
-Losing hope, lost in fear
-Somber eyes, bloodred tear
Facing the darkened day
My tears like rain, its rain like tears
Wating this time away
While given that suggestive leer
Tripped over the line of my determination
Slipped over the line of trial and error
-Lost hope, bound fear
-When theres no one to call...
Drowning in a selfish sorrow
Tears like rain, wash away [the morning gloom]
Do you have an unbroken heart to borrow?
A lost soul, whose gone astray
Tripped over the line of my determination
Slipped oer the line of trial and error
-Lost hope, bound fear
-When theres no one to call...
~Thats all i've got so far. got ne suggestions on making it better and what to add?- just put up some comments n ill revise it n mayb post up the revised version.
Do you have an unbroken heart to borrow?" i really like it actually, a lot. have you ever been really sad about something, whatever it may be, kind of too much to cry, and then you look outside and it starts to rain? for some reason it reminded me of that.
~renee~