*Update*

alright i agree chapter 3 is a little unrealistic so i changed it a little bit just a couple of words just to make it a little more belivable i will be adding chapter 6 shortly i have been getting ready for school so i haen't had enough time to write it thenks for all ur comments i apreciate it
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I added more to my story...just to let you know. I'm glad you like it.
-amanda
[Anonymous]
you cant let one person change the whole thing who cares what other people thinkg.. uggh..
[Anonymous]
hey u wanna read my story my username is: antitheus but its friends oly so u have 2 tell me 2 add u 2 my list so if u wanna read it then leave a comment on: anistaphe and then ill add u! if u cud plzz recommend me 2 sum of ur friends plz do cus i need opinions! ok bye thanx!
[Anonymous]
hey u need to write more to the story cuz its good and ya
[Anonymous]