A constant struggle of a poem

I keep hoping that you'll fall crawling scrawling on a pad of notes, knowing this is what I wrote for you. and only you. why'd you have to be the only one i've ever felt, The one i'd rather never have then have somebody else. I wanted not to fall from sight and not to try and keep your eyes in lock with mine while pretty boys keep walking by you keep walking by. so tell me how you're not the one when I ask you how you feel. yeah I know your not the one but your the only one thats real. .Steve
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Interesting...I'll be honest with you, because that's what I do:
some lines were rough, and some I really loved. I think, if you cared to, read it over again and see what you feel. The strenghts in this are the longer phrases and the great voice.

Always enjoy your thoughts. : )