I wrote this poem its not all that good but please comment on it and let me know what needs to be fixed... Thanks Love Janis.
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This land has died million times before I was born
I searched high ad low for a seeker that will help me find my path
Through the deepest woods I walked
Through the deepest seas I crossed
Throughout my mind I thought of of life it self
Don’t you see where all alone in this world
the cities have been lost
bombs have been set
The animals have crawled under the deepest of this earth
And we all die like before
peace will come when the horns of heaven will blow
But for now the fork stands tall and you are small
Evil will flourish this earth like it did before
we have no control
we have no control
we have no control
we have no control
peace and take care
gladys