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tomarrow is the last day for the poems to be entered for the contest....i stayed home today because i wasn't feeling well but the i ended up writing my best yet! i'm totally excited about it now because in my eyes its a really good one...way better than wait. here it is BROKEN By-Pearl Abraham When you wish upon your star I hope you know just who you are You used to say you loved me Now you say, one, we can’t be I’ve thought about you all night All you’ve wanted to do is fight This pressure is sinking in Our time has now come to an end You and me, we could have been But you couldn’t see what we had then We could’ve been something right, Just like you wanted that lonely night. It’s not hidden. Why can’t you see? Everything you’re doing to me. Once again you shove it in my face, This garbage maybe you should taste. I can’t help the way I am. My time will come; it’s in God’s hands. Why must you pick at everything? You should stop and hear me sing. The way you joke the way you taunt Your kind is just there to flaunt Your actions make me want to scream Always pushing down this beam It’s not fair those words you say You’re always making my heart pay But I’ve run out of all my tokens For all to see now my heart’s been broken please tell me what you think!
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holy wow Pearl that is awesome that better win cuz its good if not they don't know anything good luck to ya but you will win hands down. `Ryan
[Anonymous]
holy wow Pearl that is awesome that better win cuz its good if not they don't know anything good luck to ya but you will win hands down. `Ryan
[Anonymous]
That's awesome, good rhyme scheme. keep up the good work.