Just like Alice with all her singing roses
I sit among the blades and hum
along to you.
I lay in your rays and soak up the earth.
My body becomes alive.
The gold hits my face, and happiness floods through my veins like a drug.
Your warmth caresses me and I am loved.
I squint, blinded by your charm.
In you, I am perfect.
But the moment never lasts. All too soon
you are gone. I chase after you, hoping to catch up to your fall behind the hill.
The blackness creeps in,
you disappear and I am alone.
I am cold and shivering, lying in a heap
in a field of knives. They cut into me like razors at my flesh.
And I must rise, and find peace elsewhere.
I like the figurative language in your poem, even if I feel sad that you go through the second part.
it is good to have him and i am lucky. I don't know why i get the luck but i am glad anyway. :)
xxx