lol well i'm not really mad, but i felt like doing that! lol! well not much to say, except no one seems like they had even made an attempt to read my story...kinda saddens me but what can i do?
hello. actually i read it last night, just didnt get a chance to comment. well, it was pretty good. i liked the story line, and i like how you incorperate everyone in. it is slightly lacking in description (not necissarliy a bad thing) and in the seconed paragraph (i think) the repatition of and is a bit much. cant wait to read more, keep on writing
Patric