[the.purer.the.intention]

Feeling: depressed
The Purer the Intention, the Deeper the Wound February 10, 2005 With outstretched arms I look above At the darkened skies filled with blackened clouds Clouds that promise a refreshing rain A shower of purity covering the earth With a clap of thunder the clouds split And the fresh water begins its dance Swiftly falling to the sun stroked earth Rejuvenating the scorched ground But something’s terribly wrong with this rain For when it reaches my skin It burns like iron fresh pulled from the flame The purity burns along my tainted flesh I open my mouth and let the acid pour Down my throat to drown my lungs And I choke up the bile that’s been there for weeks The remnants of who I used to be The water trails down the scars of my arm Splitting the wounds like a blade of steel Leaving behind a trail of blisters A destructive course till it reaches the ground The rain subsides and leaves me stranded Lying broken and battered on a brand new earth And the clouds disappear and reveal the sun With its pulsing light revealing all of me As I stay motionless, bleeding on the green, green grass And let its rays soak up my tears “Is this all I’ve been reduced to?” “Will I ever be whole again?” ©
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ya... i am in love with your layout...


ahhhhh....its awesome...

<3 mel
u wrote that?
[Anonymous]
w0w.
thas intense
i prolly dont get it at all tho :|


wats m/ stand 4?
(yea, sorry i ask alotta questions)


xo*
[Anonymous]
ooh no way i see it now the m/ thing. thas so cool.


ok uMm...lol wat exactly does it all mean?

x0*
[Anonymous]
whoaaa.
thas sa-weet.

i like it even more.
dayum ur goood.
wow



xo*justine
[Anonymous]
Nirvana is awesome.


I'm glad you enjoyed my rant. =)
yes. you will be whole again. keep writing.
bright eyes is awsome... and i like your writing
[Anonymous]
yes, i write all the stuff on my diary...
[Anonymous]
thanks for the comment, i was just looking at your entries and i like a lot of the bands you have there, like brand new, and what i've heard of bayside i like...
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